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Mondays are for Music: Track 08

I’m excited about today’s music post because the piece actually belongs to a scene that I just wrote the other day! And because  of my total lack of participation on this blog (for good reason. I’m getting a lot of work done!), I’ll share it with you. 🙂

By the time he entered the room, ribbons, bows, and wrappings littered the floor. Wentworth had said he bought gifts for both him and Luke. He failed to mention showering Luke with gifts. Everywhere Aiden looked there were female accessories and trinkets. Boots, stockings, hats, gloves, a red cloak lined with the fur of an arctic fox, a diamond brooch, and an array of soaps and perfumes all scattered across the settee she had abandoned as she opted for a seat on the floor.

“This is a bit unnecessary,” Aiden announced as he stepped over a pile of curled ribbon, “I much prefer to travel lightly.”

“You’re just a killjoy,” said Wentworth, handing his partner a gift wrapped in black paper.

Aiden turned the package in his hands a few times, uncomfortable with the anticipation displayed in the two seated on the floor.With a shrug he released the box of its packaging and upon reveal, shook his head, laughing.

“I thought I might save us some time,” Wentworth mused.

“Thanks,” Aiden replied, admiring the box, containing exactly two hundred bullets specifically designed for his pistols, “I do hate making the trip to stock up.”

“It’s my turn!” Luke exclaimed, pulling out the gift she had purchased for him. Aiden raised a brow and Wentworth pointed to his new emerald stickpin, showing it off proudly.

She stood, and with two hands and a hopeful smile, presented Aiden with his present, wrapped carefully in the exact shade of red that matched her gown and the inside of his collar (he was wearing that coat today, she noticed). He took it from her gently, never removing his gaze from hers, the image of her sleeping on the floor burned into his memory.

Nodding, he opened it, and when he pulled the riding gloves out from the paper, his breath caught and he nearly felt his heart stop.

Useless.

That was what his father had deemed him. A child with a stutter could be silenced, but a boy who feared horses could not learn to ride and would be of no use to him at all. He would never inherit the dukedom if he didn’t learn his place.

Gabrielle was screaming. He could hear her voice through the thick wood doors that was their father’s study. She yelled and pulled fits, demanding the man be less cruel, but in the end, the truth was that she was not his mother and held no power over his upbringing.

Sinking against the wall, seven year old Aiden sighed and frowned at the carpet. He shouldn’t be alive. Everyone would be much happier if he hadn’t ever been born.

“They’re having it out again, are they?”

Aiden looked up to see the elegant structure of his brother-in-law looking curiously at the doors.

“What’s he on about this time? Surely he knows by now that your speech is nothing to be frowned upon.”

“H-h-hors-horses.”

Micah St. Lawrence, the only man (save Fletcher) to ever look upon Aiden as a human being and a respectable member of society, frowned at this. “Horses? Have you let them go?”

When Aiden shook his head, his black hair falling over his eyes, Micah sighed. “I see. You are still fearful of them.”

The boy looked up at him, hurt reflecting in his eyes, and frustration visible on the lines of his brow. With a gentle smile, Micah crouched down to his level and with a smile, withdrew a pair of riding gloves. They were camel in colour, to match all of his earthy, yet bright attire.

“Do you see these?” he asked, not expecting a response from Aiden. He had learned to keep his questions rhetorical for the most part. “These just arrived today from the glover. There was a bit of an accident at the tannery, in which a wizard spilled a pot of magic dust over all the leather.”

Aiden perked up, his eyes becoming curious and filled with wonder. Did wizards exist? He had never seen one.

“The dust, so I was told, was meant to ease fear. The tanner intended to use it on the saddles, to keep horses from becoming too skittish, but alas, it fell all over the wrong leather.”

He took one of Aiden’s small hands and slid one of the oversized gloves onto it. “I will teach you to ride, and with these, I promise you will not be afraid.

“Let Gabrielle and your father have words. We shall visit the stables and pat my horse.”

With both hands lost inside of his new gloves, Aiden nodded and, walking closely beside the man he wished so dearly to be his father, anticipated proving himself worthy of inheritance.

“Do you like them, Mr. Finnegan?”

Aiden blinked, returning to the present and looking down at his gift. The backs had been embossed with his initials, just as his saddle was.

“You’re a busy man,” Luke went on, “and I noticed that you haven’t taken the time to purchase yourself new gloves, as badly as you need them.”

Wentworth chimed in then. “Perhaps you would like to take Miss Avery for a ride down the lane.”

Still off balance, Aiden merely hummed in agreement. “Of course,” he said, “I’ll be right down.”

He left the room, dazed, and when he stumbled slowly into his chambers, he rested his back against the door. He took a few breaths to calm himself, clutching the new gloves with white knuckles.

When his thoughts returned to him, he reached over to his wardrobe and pulled out the gloves he had worn for over twenty years. It was with these gloves that he had found his confidence and learned to ride. There had been no wizard, he learned that later on and Micah was even better a man than he was given credit for. He had faith in Aiden when no one did. He shared Gabrielle’s pride in him, and saw past his handicaps, knowing that beneath the stuttering and the fearful fits, he was still just a boy who needed love and tenderness like any other.

Steeling his nerves, Aiden brought the gloves over to the corner and, pulling out one of the miniatures, placed the image of Micah inside of them. It was time to move on.

“I won’t forget you,” he whispered, a promise more to himself than anyone.

Fletcher watched from the doorway, and when Aiden turned, he nodded in silent approval.

The Book of Luke completion progress: 42%

The Noble Project completion progress: 10%


Recap: 15% progress

I’m a little just past the 15% completion mark inThe Book of Luke, the first book in The Noble Project series. (I know that in my last post, I said I was near 20%, but realistically, I’m closer to 15. Minor details, I know.) I figured that even though we’ve had character inspiration, snippet posts, and even a little bit on publishing, I haven’t encompassed what this is all about. So today I’m going to do a recap of what’s happened in this story from the beginning, to the point I’m at now.

So first, we met Aiden:

The black boots that strode through the halls of the underground city threatened citizens with authority just as much as the man wearing them commanded their submission. Black deerskin breeches and a plain black waistcoat demanded their silence. A double breasted riding coat forced power upon them, and leather gloves, one gripping a horse’s reins, caused women to usher their children inside of their houses. For all the black, however, it was the stark white of a linen undershirt, the crispness of a pristine cravat, and the mirror shine of two silver pistols that kept the people of this city in their places.

Up above, in the world that saw the sun, he had been a feared man, a dangerous man, but the moment he had come down here to serve, he had proved just how menacing he could be. Down here there were no laws to keep his tendencies at bay, no status quo to force him into gentlemanly behavior.

Down in this horrible city of blasphemy and pleasures, Aiden Jayson Finnegan unleashed a reign of terror.

Shortly after, Wentworth graces us with his presence:

Seated in an armchair before the desk was a man roughly twenty years his senior, though one would hardly be able to tell. His shining blond hair curled loosely, but neatly atop his head and his laughing blue eyes sported no crows feet at their corners. He was shorter than Aiden, and slightly less slender, but even his form, by means of pure muscle, commanded respect.

His clothing, too, was opposite from the dark Mr. Finnegan. Light creams, embroidered in deep rose and blush complimented the lace spilling from his sleeves and neck, and the brilliant gold of his buttons and stickpin.

“You’re looking well, Aiden,” he said with a chuckle, observing the outfit so typical of his friend, and shaking his head at what he considered to be funeral wear.

“Don’t toy with me, Fly,” Aiden replied gruffly, taking a seat next to him, “I’m tired.”

“Ha. Tired of what? It’s near two-thirty in the afternoon!”

Aiden groaned, but ignored him otherwise. This man, Wentworth, was, quite literally, his partner in crime, and had been since the very beginning of his work here. They had a system, one that worked rather well for the both of them: Wentworth spoke, and Aiden ignored.

We learn a little bit about their line of work, and the sort of men they are:

Wentworth shrugged then, mostly because he didn’t actually have any opinion on the event that had taken place eight years ago. That was just the way Aiden was. His disregard for life was easily the reason he had been partnered with Wentworth, who valued the breathing but not the material. Possessions were replaceable. People were not.

That train of thought was a bit contradictory to his current profession as the most skilled charmer of innocents. Young girls fell weak at his knees, and into his arms, where they were then hoisted up into his carriage and carried to a facility where they were housed until being shipped out to a dealer.

He had been to slave auctions before; they were always loud and lively events, but he himself had little interest in actually purchasing one of his own. Once the girls had learned the truth of where they were headed, they hated him. It didn’t bother him overmuch; his position was far above theirs, but he knew that he would not want a servant who would resent him, and he certainly did not want a lover who would resist.

The same could not be said about Aiden, who, while Wentworth had gone to work seducing these poor maidens with his sweet words and flashy dress, kept them silent. Wentworth did not like to deliver the girls but Aiden had no remorse. Lining them up and sorting them into groups based on their attractiveness was nothing more than his job. He could handle their tears and their wailing easily. It meant they were frightened.

They deserved to be frightened. If a girl was so stupid as to allow the words of a finely dressed gentleman to sway her decisions, then she wasn’t worthy of anything more than what he was leading her towards. Foolishness was the greatest mistake a person could make in their life. He was paying for his, and now they would pay for theirs.

They receive their orders, kicking off the main plot line:

Once they were again seated before the desk, Xander took up his place behind it, and with his fingertips set firmly on the wood, leaned forward, his eyes serious and his mouth unsmiling.

“I have stolen something from the both of you,” he began, “something very dear to you. Both possessions are being held in a safe facility and once this mission is complete, will be returned to you.”

Neither of the two men even blinked. Xander had never threatened them before, never stole from them, and never felt the need to take collateral.

“This is serious then.” Aiden’s voice held no hint of emotion and he snuffed the life from his cigarette into an ivory tray.

“Very much so,” he replied. “There is a girl to the North. You two will retrieve her for me.”

Wentworth raised a brow. “I beg your pardon? One girl?”

Relaxing his pose, Xander reached for a decanter and poured himself a glass of amber liquid. “I had set my sights on this girl many years ago, when she was a child.”

Aiden crossed his arms. “She is valuable?”

“No, not valuable. This particular girl is a personal desire of mine. I intend to keep her.”

Then, Miss Luke Avery makes an appearance:

    Luke had no intention of letting any of these men up her skirts, but at the same time, very few of them were trying. She had made her desires known. It wasn’t just that she wanted marriage (she would never simply settle for a boy who compromised her), she wanted love.

These thoughts, naturally, made her quite unpopular.

It wasn’t exactly that she wasn’t liked, as many of the men, married and not, did thoroughly enjoy looking at her, and had no issue making a show of trying for her affections as she bustled about the tavern refilling drinks and making cheerful small talk with her father’s patrons. She was good fun for everyone when under the influence, but never would any of them consider her for marriage.

It wasn’t only the boys her age that were turned off by her attitude, but their mothers. They weren’t a big community, just slightly more populated than a village, and eligible members of either sex were scarce. No one could believe that Luke Avery, the daughter of the tavern owner, had the audacity to proclaim she would not wed without love.

We learn the state of their world:

The Noble Project was not a load of pig shit, she thought to herself. It was a desperate measure, taken by their rather desperate king, but for all the political and socioeconomic good it would do their world, she didn’t care. The program created nobility out of peasants. She could become a noble. She could save her father.

Rounding a corner and quickening her pace, she tried to contain her excitement. Their world was in a horrible place, she knew. Some years before she was born, strange things began to take place. People were becoming ill, with no apparent cure, mad for no reason, and even worse, crumpling to the ground–dead, with no cause.

It started somewhere in the East, steadily spreading across the land to the far West, and hitting the North and South as it went. Panic ripped throughout the kingdom. Walls were built, intruders executed, and by the more religious folk, anyone who strayed from the moral code of the Good Book were cast off into Hell without a second thought.

Still, for all of the efforts the citizens put forth to stop the spread of what they didn’t know or understand, it carried on.

And how The Noble Project came to be:

Whether the new king’s ailment was the intent of the Infection or simply a glorious opportunity, death unleashed itself upon the court.

It came swiftly, with such a force that it shook the very foundation. There wasn’t a soul with noble blood inside the walls that was spared that night. It wasn’t a violent massacre and it wasn’t the plague. It was something new, something strange. Something that Cale would never be able to forget.

[…]

He could not brush this off. He could not give himself the luxury of a mourning period, and he would not move on. Was this display a warning to him? Perhaps, but he was dying, so the threat of murder did not frighten him. Was it a promise that his kingdom would fall? No. No one could make that promise. No one could make that promise because until he drew his terminal breath, he would fight for his people.

And fight he did.

Cale was not a warlord like his father, not initially. Cale was the sort of man who studied position, class, and the effect it had on his kingdom’s economic standing. They could not afford to allow strangers into the land to trade, so they were entirely dependent on their peasants for resources. He had ignored the problems of the peasants before, so this time, he would repay them.

He knew that a kingdom could not flourish without its class devisions and king to peasant was too great a step. It was clear, by the destruction of the noble class, that he was not the only one who knew this. So he rebuilt.

The Noble Project was instituted six months after the genocide at the High City court, pulling exceptional candidates from the poorer population, fitting them with a title, a fortune, and rigorous training, then launching them into society, born again as nobility.

Aiden and Wentworth put their deception in motion:

Ridiculous thoughts kept coming to her. The weather, recipes she was certain she had never made, dates that  held no importance to her, and faces of people she had never met. Breathing worsened, and she soon found herself trapped against a wall, gasping for air, and praying that each breath would not be her last.

“Somebody help me.” It didn’t sound like her voice, and it didn’t sound like her language, but it was the best she could do.

“I’m not infected,” she said weakly as someone, though she couldn’t see them through her foggy blindness, charged forward.

A gunshot rang through the air, and when all went silent, including her thoughts, Luke’s knees gave out. A strong hand on her back stopped her from hitting the cobblestone of the alley she had wandered into, and when an arm came under her legs to lift her, she let her head loll back.

“Miss Avery,” came the smooth, deep voice of her hero, “we have you at last.”

And Luke falls for it hook, line, and sinker. (As much fun as she is, she isn’t the brightest of females)

“And there you have it!” Wentworth said, beaming. “And our job is to transport you safely to the High City.”

Luke’s breath caught in her throat. Certainly he didn’t mean…

But he did.

“You have been selected as a candidate for The Noble Project,” he told her gently, bending to his knees before her. “We have orders from his majesty–” he held out his arm and Aiden deposited a roll of parchment into his hand, “–to return to the city with you.”

He undid the seal and Luke stared ahead at the royal notice before her. Aiden watched silently. She would find no flaw in the papers. Among one of his most cherished, and most valuable talents was forgery of the written word. He needed only a sample of type or handwriting and for the rest of his days he would be able to replicate it exactly. As a child, he had practiced with none other than the Cale Rutherford, the King himself.

Luke begins her attempts at winning Aiden’s friendship (lol)

“This ship,” she repeated, looking up at him with those bright emerald eyes of hers, “it is not made to carry people. Why is that?”

“Do you find your accommodations unpleasant?”

“No, but–”

“Then don’t ask questions,” he snapped, cutting her off.

“Curiosity is healthy.” She was gripping the edge of the ship now, leaning backwards, her heels the only things keeping her vertical. She really was a child.

“It kills cats, I hear,” he replied, with little emotion.

Luke thought on that for a moment before her face lit up and she let out a rather fetching laugh. “Mr. Finnegan, are you being funny?”

The make the first stop on their journey!

The city was bustling with people of all sorts, much unlike her town. In her village, everyone had been set in their ways and the ways of their parents before them and their parents before them. Here, it seemed as if people had made their own choices. Women were laughing, men were hauling goods across the streets, and small children were chasing cats and dogs. Musicians sat on the corners, strumming their strings and beating away at various percussive instruments, their hats turned upward, a silent request for a bit of silver.

“This is wonderful!” Luke cried out to Wentworth who was riding carefully alongside her.

“The sun does know how to shine,” he agreed, raising his voice against the noise of the streets.

This was something Luke hadn’t considered. By the sea, this city had the wonderful advantage of having the sun visible at all hours of the day. It reflected off of the ocean’s glassy surface and radiated through the very streets, unlike her own town, where smoke hung thick over the rooftops and caked itself onto the very walls that made up their houses.

“Ah, but there are places far more beautiful than this pit!” Wentworth called to her, giving Rosie’ s reins a small flick and trotting on ahead.

Foreshadowing happens:

“I’ve half a mind to let you stay there,” he replied, checking his timepiece, “but fortunately for you, I am not permitted to leave you in dirty barns.”

“So Mr. Finnegan does take orders from someone.”

Aiden froze at her smug tone, his watch tucked halfway into his waistcoat. In ten years, he had never considered that fact. He did take orders, but not in the way an employee or a servant might. He made the decisions, he handled negotiations. He was a leader. He was in control.

Wasn’t he?

Suddenly here, with this girl a decade his junior, with no credibility, he began to doubt.

“Mr. Finnegan?”

Slowly, he looked up at her. She wasn’t smiling at him anymore. Some of her mousy hair had fallen over her eyes and she moved carefully to brush it aside.

She looked familiar.

Familiar in a way that he couldn’t place, and wasn’t sure he wanted to. Nothing about her was distinct, no part of her would stand out against a crowd except for her smile, and she wasn’t displaying that now. His eyes traveled across her face, searching, and wondering, but keeping an unsteady distance.

“Did I say something?”

Clearing his throat, Aiden shook his curiosity and reached forward, plucking her from the saddle. She was much smaller than her current garment suggested, and much lighter than any of the women he had ever previously lifted.

Luke realizes that men will always be men:

“My apologies if this is not what  you would consider ‘suitable housing’,” Aiden snapped, throwing her an icy glare, one that normally caused the bravest of men to cower in their boots. Luke, however, simply sighed.

“I won’t complain,” she told him, looking at him with a keen eye, “I’m not ungrateful.”

Aiden opened his mouth to retort, but halted his speech as the sharp booming of nearly a dozen doors slamming resonated through the entire establishment. This noise was followed immediately by the thundering of footsteps down the hall, and finally, the high pitched squeals of excited ladies.

‘Ladies’ was an incorrect term Luke realized, as these women came pouring down the stairs. Dressed only in the naughtiest undergarments she had ever seen, and tiny bustle skirts, the occupation of these girls was immediately clear and she felt her jaw fall slack.

“It’s a whorehouse.”

Her observation went without reply.

“Mr. Simon!” They cried, all crowding together at the bottom of the stairs, none of them daring to step foot onto the tavern’s floor, but each vying their way to the front of the pack.

“Ladies,” he replied smoothly, bowing with all the grace of a practiced gentleman, “it has been too long.”

“And Mr. Finnegan.”

As Aiden was addressed, their voices got lower, sultry, and slightly breathless. Luke rolled her eyes at this and swiveled in her seat to face the bar. She didn’t know either of these men very well, but it was quite clear that Wentworth was a man set out to please all the women he could find, and Aiden, well, he was superior to dealing with the troubles of a common tavern wench.

When the tall, brooding man stepped forward, Luke watched with vague interest, but when his hand closed around the bare arm of a mildly attractive blonde, her eyes widened. As he led the lingerie clad woman up the stairs with a firm hand on the small of her naked back and didn’t even so much look over his shoulder at either his partner or his charge, Luke felt her heart sink a little bit.

So perhaps Aiden Finnegan wasn’t superior to dealing with the common tavern wench.

And there we have it. Hope you’re enjoying the ride! I sure am! 😀


I didn’t know that! (Research is key)

Image via NaturalHorseWorld.com

Despite growing up right next to a horse farm, I know absolutely nothing about them. I know how to feed them snacks and pat their noses, sure, but actual care or riding? I got nothing. Alright, I’ve got a little something. On our honeymoon, Mr. Frenchie and I did some horseback riding through the foothills of El Yunque in Puerto Rico. As our bus pulled up to the hacienda, I distinctly remember clapping my hands enthusiastically and proclaiming, “This will make for excellent research!”

What can I say? I’m a writer.

Horses are a pretty big part of The Noble Project, what with them being the main means of transportation and all, so I do need to do a littler investigating.

Aside from necessary research, I find it critical to research some finer points as well to spiff up a particular scene. This could make me a little obsessive, but small details really make things more interesting without anyone noticing.

For example, if I wrote:

Luke pressed on about Aiden’s love of animals while Wentworth answered cheerily, fastening the saddle atop Jeremiah’s back.

We would all read it, accept it, and move on. There’s really nothing wrong with it–it gets the point across in a decent manner. I, however, am a huge fan of the ‘show, don’t tell’ sort of aspect of writing. I do think that some writers take that a bit too far, but that’s simply matter of personal preference.

In any case, what actually came out of my keyboard was:

Wentworth opened up the door and led Jeremiah out of his stall, lowering the saddle, a gleaming creation of solid black leather, embossed with what appeared to be the most elaborate initials Luke had ever seen. Still, there was no mistaking it. A.J.F. was not a common combination of letters.

“Aiden has an affinity for animals,” Wentworth explained, smoothing out the blanket beneath the saddle, “he knows how to care for them. He raises them up big and strong because he puts all of his trust in them.”

“Why?” Luke asked as she bent down to retrieve the cinch straps that he passed to her.

Wentworth paused. They were dancing on a truth and that made him uncomfortable. Still, he smiled and plowed ahead, coming around to fasten the straps with a cheery tug.

“Because people have only betrayed him.”

This is better for what I would consider obvious reasons. I think most of you will agree.

  1. We all get to see a little bit about saddling a horse
  2. The scene has more life. We can visualize with more certainty just how Wentworth went about saddling Jeremiah up and also keep note of how Luke helps out, keeping true to her roots as a peasant.
  3. We have dialogue! And everyone loves dialogue. Dialogue is a wonderful way to convey information that a reader might need. I’m sure you already knew that though.

I have to say that the only reason I researched saddling a horse was to find out what the cinch straps were called. I ended up on an e-how about how to saddle a horse, so I read through it and used it to my advantage. One thing I do not do with my new knowledge is pretend to suddenly be an expert. If I started speaking in equestrian, I’m almost certain I would lost each and every single reader on the spot.

Nay, my friend. I use my findings like seasoning and will always make the subject matter clear and understandable.

If I had to look it up, chances are some of you didn’t have a clue either. Let’s learn together. 🙂